Everytime I see people going crazy for nothing.. Killing each other... Ensuring that humanity doesnt remain there in anyone's dictionary... Its Depressing.. Disturbing.. And.. made me write this short poem.. I ensured it was short.. :)
The “DAYS”
There are days when the flowers reject the bees..
The wandering waves dislike the sea…
Revenge cracks the brotherly faces..
And failing faith I see it in traces..
The moonlight doesn’t soothe
And the sun adds to the gloom..
Differences matter the most..
World haunted by some evil ghost
The kohl in the eyes irks
And the bangle in the arm shirks
Womanhood widowed within
Remarried again with a sin
The rose petal irate the mind
And the green grass makes me blind…
The answers confuse me more..
And the questions turn more sour..
14 comments:
Nice!
thoughful and beautiful..keep writing :-)
Thought provoking and beautifully penned :)
many more to come...right? :P
God bless you
its a nice structure and hence a nice poem..but this time i am not so clear what you mean!! hmm
like this line anyways..
Remarried again with a sin
:) keep writing..
profound... it really huts to see tht ppl get carried away and hit each other and kill each other in the name of some leader who has nothing but a selfish motive of gaining power...
i like ur choice of words and Purple Vibes :) will keep coming back :D
Thanks @bluepanther @meeta
@nabeel with your encouragement.. I will surely write more :)
@frozenwell hmmm.. noted :) thanks
Thanks @richa .. it really hurts..
Lovely
wow lovely poetry
Thanks @ani_aset such encouragement means a lot :)
*The kohl in the eyes irks
And the bangle in the arm shirks
Womanhood widowed within
Remarried again with a sin* --- Made me shudder...
Simply written but touches a chord deep down.
lovely words
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